Story by Michael O'Connor from Februs 14
Gravel
crunched beneath the wheels of the red Mercedes as it rolled to a halt in the
chill shadow of an ivy-walled mansion. Five other cars were already parked in
the yard. Marcella looked anxiously at her husband as he switched off the
engine.
‘I’m
not sure I like the look of this place,’ she said hesitantly. ‘Perhaps…’
‘We
haven’t come all this way for you to get cold feet,’ Ben interjected firmly. ‘Besides,
the small fortune I paid to book you in here is non-refundable.’
‘Money
is all you ever think about,’ the chestnut-haired woman whined. ‘Don’t you give
a damn about me? These Vallance people could be psychopaths. God knows what
they’ll do to me once you’re gone.’
‘What
they’ll do is cure you of that bloody poisonous addiction of yours,’ he
replied. ‘It’s only because I care about you that I’ve gone to all this
trouble. I don’t want you smoking yourself into an early grave, so would you
kindly stop behaving like a spoilt brat? You do want to stop smoking,
don’t you?’
‘Of
course I do,’ Marcella snapped. ‘Haven’t I been trying hard enough ever since
we got married?’
Ben
shook his head. ‘If you’d been trying hard enough, my darling, we wouldn’t be
here. Come on, let’s get you checked in.’
He
unloaded her overnight bag from the boot and she reluctantly followed him up
the steps to the front door of the mansion. Regardless of what she had agreed
to, if she did not like the look of whoever answered the door, she would not
set foot inside it. Ben could blub all he liked about promises broken and money
lost.
The
woman who appeared on the second toll of the doorbell was a pleasant surprise,
especially for Ben. She was in her mid-thirties, blonde and healthily bronzed,
with classic high cheekboned features. Stylish gold-rimmed spectacles framed
her soft blue eyes. Her cream silk blouse and black slacks did full justice to
her slender figure. Ben looked sorry he was not the one checking into the
Behavioural Correction Centre.
Having
accepted Ben’s apologies for arriving late and exchanging customary
pleasantries, the softly spoken woman invited Marcella to come inside. She
threw Ben a look that pleaded for a last minute reprieve.
‘I’ll
pick you up at six tomorrow evening,’ he told her. ‘This is for your own good,
my darling.’
A
fleeting peck on the cheek and he was gone, abandoning Marcella to the
appallingly attractive blonde and her fellow Correctional Therapists.
‘You
may call me Brigitte,’ the woman smiled, ushering her through the hallway. ‘Are
you nervous?’
‘Just
a bit,’ Marcella admitted. ‘To be perfectly honest, I’m not sure I should be
here. This was all Ben’s idea. He feels I’m in need of radical therapy. You
were recommended by one of his colleagues.’
‘We
do have a very high success rate in combating behavioural problems,’ Brigitte
told her. Have you heard anything about our methods?’
‘Only
that they’re a bit on the unorthodox side,’ Marcella replied.
She
laughed. ‘Some would consider them so. We don’t like to publicise our methods.
Only our results.’
‘What
exactly are your methods?’ Marcella demanded.
‘You
will soon find out,’ was the mysterious reply.
Marcella
followed her up a long and winding staircase, to a small, cell-like room. The
walls and ceiling were a stark white and the wooden floor bare. The only
furnishings were a small bed and a wardrobe.
‘Come
downstairs when you have unpacked,’ Brigitte told her. ‘I will introduce you to
my husband and our other guests.’
‘Cell
Block H has more character than this place,’ Marcella sighed, as soon as the
door was shut. ‘And this is supposed to make me stop smoking!’
It
did not take her long to unpack. With every passing moment, her desire for a
cigarette increased. She tried distracting herself with the view from the
window, which was pleasant enough. A large, tree-lined garden led to a shallow
river, beyond which loomed acres of forest. Marcella glanced at her watch. It
was six-thirty. She had not had a cigarette for over four hours. Instinctively,
she reached for her purse and took out a packet.
‘What
they don’t know won’t worry them,’ she reasoned, placing the cigarette between
her lips.
It
was on her third puff that the smoke alarm on the ceiling began squealing like
a stuck pig, causing her to leap from the bed. She threw open the window and
tossed out her cigarette, praying the infernal alarm would shut up before
somebody heard it.
A
moment later, the door of her room burst open. Brigitte had not bothered to
knock. As if by unspoken command, the smoke alarm fell silent.
The
blonde woman’s pleasant expression of earlier had been replaced by a stern
glare, that rendered her positively wicked. Marcella stared at the floor,
feeling herself blush.
‘Naughty,
naughty!’ Brigitte tutted, stepping into the room and shutting the door. ‘Breaking
the rules already.’
‘You
never said I couldn’t have a cigarette,’ Marcella protested.
‘It
should hardly be necessary to state the obvious,’ she replied icily. ‘Now, I
must punish you.’
‘Punish
me!’
She
nodded. ‘In this house, no infringement of rules is permitted to go unpunished.
Turn around and bend over the window ledge.’
‘Why?’
‘Just
do as I say. I’m in charge here. Or perhaps you would prefer to receive your
punishment from my husband.’
Marcella’s
first instinct was to sharply remind the arrogant blonde that she was dealing
with a twenty-three-year-old woman, not a child. But there was an authority in
Brigitte’s tone that commanded obedience.
Bent
over the window, palms flat on the ledge, Marcella felt her calf-length taffeta
skirt being raised. Something she could not explain prevented her voicing the
protest that sprang to her lips. Holding her skirt high above her waist,
Brigitte surveyed the white lace-cupped mounds of her buttocks.
‘What
are you doing?’ Marcella demanded.
The
reply was an open palmed slap that stung the bare pale flesh between her pantie
edge and the top of her left stocking. A perfect pink print was left in its
wake. Brigitte struck her again on the opposite side, waited a moment for the
afterburn to fully smoulder, then delivered half a dozen smacks to her bottom,
in rapid succession. The flimsy lace of Marcella’s panties provided little
protection from the heartily administered punishment. Her backside and upper
thighs tingled pleasantly as her skirt was smoothed back down over her legs.
‘Come
downstairs,’ Brigitte commanded. ‘It’s time for our first group session. Bring
your cigarettes.’
Marcella
meekly followed her, uncertain whether she was more shocked by the spanking, or
her own reaction to the idea of having her cheeks reddened for the heinous
crime of sneaking a cigarette. But instead, she had experienced a kind of
pleasure. Worst of all, she was certain Brigitte was aware of this.
The
five other female guests were already assembled. They stood in the centre of a
large room that had been cleared of all furniture, with the exception of an
iron stepladder. The women ranged in age from early twenties to late thirties
and all seemed equally ill at ease. Marcella was hurriedly introduced, then
ordered to get into line. She obeyed without protest. Brigitte’s authority over
her was quite remarkable.
The
six women collectively tensed when a stockily built man in a sharply tailored
grey three-piece suit entered the room. He looked at least ten years older than
Brigitte. His gelled black hair and pencil thin moustache lent him a general
gangster appearance. The six women spared his general demeanour only a glance,
before their eyes were drawn to the long, thin cane in his gloved right fist.
‘My
husband, Max,’ Brigitte announced, before introducing each of the women by her
first name.
‘A
pleasure to meet you, ladies,’ he said, flexing his cane in both hands. ‘Do we
all know why we’re here?’
Silence
was the unanimous reply.
He
stepped towards the group. ‘I’ll tell you, shall I? You are here because of a
vice, namely cigarettes. You have tried all the usual methods, without success,
so it falls to Brigitte and I to cure you of your addiction. Some of you are
here reluctantly. One or two, out of curiosity. But all of you would like to
give up that filthy, anti-social habit. Our methods here are somewhat
old-fashioned, some might even say brutal. But they have been proven to work.
However, if any of you are having second thoughts about proceeding with this
course of correction, now is the time to speak. If you are not women enough for
the punishment I am about to give you, Brigitte will be happy to arrange an
alternative, in private.’
The
women exchanged furtive glances. Marcella was tempted by the latter option, but
remained silent. After all, there was no guarantee she would not enjoy whatever
Max had in store, even though the cane did look terrifying.
‘Very
well,’ he said. ‘You have all decided to be brave girls, so let’s begin. You
will be selected for punishment in alphabetical order. Angela, you’re first.
Hand over your cigarette packet to Brigitte.’
The
thin, bespectacled woman standing next to Marcella squirmed anxiously, as she
handed over her Silk Cut packet. Brigitte opened it and counted the contents.
‘Six,’
she announced.
Max
nodded, flexing his cane.
‘Angela,
take off your jeans and stand face forward on the ladder,’ he commanded. ‘Come
on now, no need to be shy. The other ladies will not get off lighter.’
The
scarlet faced young woman stared fixedly at the wall, as she unbuttoned her
tight blue jeans and tugged them down to her ankles.
‘Knickers
down as well,’ Max added. ‘We don’t want anything getting in the way. Good, now
up onto the ladder. Second step is fine. Lean forward and hold on tight. This
is going to hurt.’
The
cane whistled through the air and struck the woman’s clenched buttocks, with a
resounding THWACK! She shrieked in response. A further five strokes
followed, leaving half a dozen fiery furrows streaked neatly across her cheeks.
‘You
may step down,’ Max told her, lowering the cane. ‘Don’t cover up, just get back
into line. Shame is an important aspect of your therapy. Right, who’s next? Ah
yes, Cassandra. Let’s see how many cigarettes are in your packet.’
Marcella
cringed, as she watched each woman in turn bare her backside and mount the
ladder to be caned. She was last in line, a fact that did not greatly please
her. Though there was an undeniable pleasure to be derived from seeing and
hearing the others receive the cane, she would have preferred to have her own
punishment over and done with. Waiting only increased the apprehension. An
additional torment was her inability to remember how many cigarettes remained
in her packet. She only knew for certain that it contained enough to earn her
an extremely sore arse.
At
last, it was her turn. The five women beside her stood with heads bowed and
rear cheeks scorched. Brigitte counted the cigarettes in her packet twice, then
sighed heavily.
‘Oh
dear, seventeen! I wouldn’t care to be in your shoes, Marcella.’
‘You
had better keep your knickers on,’ Max suggested after she had stepped out of
her skirt. ‘Otherwise, you won’t be able to sit down for a week.’
‘I’ll
take my punishment like all the others,’ Marcella defiantly declared, rolling
her panties down over her hips.
Max
shrugged. ‘As you wish.’
She
stepped onto the ladder, leaned forward and hugged the cold steel with both
arms. Brigitte held up the hem of her blouse, so that her round bottom was
completely exposed. The instant she felt the first bite of the cane, she
regretted her reckless bravado. The breathtaking whack stung like a thousand
wasps. But now that she had submitted to her punishment, there was no turning
back.
Swish!
Whack! Marcella greeted each stroke with a
sharp cry, the five other women wincing in sympathy. Max spared her no mercy,
laying each stroke of the cane on a fresh piece of skin, printing criss-crossed
lines of fire on her buttocks and the backs of her thighs.
The
caning seemed to last forever. When she finally stepped down from the ladder,
her bottom was throbbing violently.
‘You
have an hour before dinner,’ Brigitte told her women. ‘You may spend it as you
wish. A word of warning, however. Your cigarettes will be counted again, so
unless you have an unnatural fondness for the cane, you would be ill advised to
light up.’
Marcella
elected to cool off under the shower. Afterwards, she intended to treat her
burning cheeks to a soothing dose of moisturiser. The fleeting desire for a
cigarette was accompanied by an increased sharpness to the throbbing in her
rear. Unfortunately, this had the exact opposite of the deterrent effect.
Though on the severe side, the caning had given her a perverse pleasure. As a
result, it was not only her backside that was on fire.
With
the cool water from the shower streaming down over her naked body, she slid her
right hand between her thighs, to cup the furry mound of her sex. Shutting her
eyes, she visualised Max, this time punishing her with the hard staff inside
his trousers. She inserted a finger between the slick fields of her labia,
yearning to be filled by something more substantial. It took her only moments
to reach orgasm that was as satisfying as an all over massage.
As
the afterglow faded, it was replaced by the familiar post coital craving so
despised by her husband. A cigarette was suddenly the most desirable thing on
earth. It might even be worth a second caning, she mused, as she towelled
herself dry. The instant she touched her bottom, she thought otherwise. That
particular end had been subjected to more than enough punishment for one day.
The
more she tried to ignore it, the greater her nicotine craving became. If only
she had brought a spare packet. It would surely be possible to have a quick
puff in the toilet, without being detected.
On
her way back to her room, she passed by an open door. A glance inside the empty
room brought her up short. A horribly tempting Silk Cut packet lay seductively
on the bed.
Like
a prowler, Marcella looked furtively around. The allure of the cigarette packet
was irresistible. Without really thinking, she found herself inside the room
and snatching it from the bed. It contained only six cigarettes, which eased
her conscience somewhat. A bottom that had received only six strokes of the
cane would be well able to soak up a few more.
As
she was replacing the packet on the bed, she heard a door shut further down the
corridor. The shock caused her to drop her precious stolen cigarette. Bending
over to pick it up, she heard a startling exclamation.
‘What
the hell do you think you’re doing?’
A
red faced Angela stood in the doorway of the room, trembling with indignation.
Marcella straightened up, her heart sinking.
‘Well?’
‘I’m
sorry,’ she muttered. ‘I was pilfering one of your cigarettes. I hadn’t meant
to. I was just passing your room, when I saw them on the bed and…’
‘You
thought you’d drop me in the shit,’ the irate woman concluded.
‘No!’
Marcella protested. ‘I was just dying for a cigarette. I didn’t mean to get you
into trouble.’
‘Did
you not hear what Brigitte said?’ she demanded. ‘Anyone found with a cigarette
missing is in for another caning. You wouldn’t dare smoke one of your own, but
you were ready to see me get another thrashing. You bitch!’
‘I’m
really sorry,’ Marcella whispered.
‘You
will be when I tell Max about this,’ Angela promised.
‘Please
don’t do that,’ Marcella begged. ‘Look, here’s your cigarette back. There’s no
harm done.’
Angela
snatched it from her. ‘That’s not good enough. I shall have to tell the others
what you’ve done, just in case they’re stupid enough to trust you. I felt sorry
for you when I saw Max giving you such a caning. Now, I think you didn’t get
half enough.’
Marcella
sighed. ‘So you’re going to tell him?’
Angela
thought for a minute, before answering. ‘Maybe not. It might be more fun if I
were to punish you myself.’
‘How?’
‘I
don’t know yet. At any rate, there isn’t enough time now. We’ll deal with you
later tonight, when Max and Brigitte aren’t around to interrupt.’
‘We?’
Angela
smiled. ‘I’m sure the others will want a hand in your punishment, once I tell
them what you’ve done.’
Dinner
was a tribute to Brigitte’s culinary skills, but Marcella was in no mood to
enjoy it. She could think of nothing but the forthcoming humiliation, at the
hands of her five fellow guests. Glances in their direction confirmed that
Angela had already told at least two about her act of betrayal.
After
the meal, Brigitte again took stock of each woman’s cigarette packet. Max was
especially pleased that all were accounted for and announced that the women
were to be rewarded for their good behaviour.
They
were led into a softly lit room, containing half a dozen white sheeted beds,
arranged side by side. Baroque music drifted from a pair of large wall
speakers. Max told the women to strip.
‘Don’t
worry,’ he reassured them. ‘This time, I want your bottoms bared for pleasure.’
The
six women stripped and each lay face down on one of the beds. Max and Brigitte
surveyed the row of bare and blushing bottoms. Marcella looked over her
shoulder, as they moved to the foot of her bed.
Brigitte
uncapped a glass bottle and poured a delightfully chill and exotically scented
lotion over both cane-scorched buns. Max then began massaging it over her
supple globes, with delicate palms and fingers. Every trace of burning seemed
to instantly evaporate, to be replaced by a sensual tingling. Max was as skilled
a masseur as he was a disciplinarian. As his hands glided lovingly over
Marcella’s bottom, fingers brushing inside her cleft and the tops of her
thighs, her sex drooled hotter than a sauna. She ached for his fingers to touch
her there, if only accidentally. But if the handsome master sensed her desire,
he chose to ignore it. Once her hindquarters had been thoroughly oiled, he
casually turned his attentions to the woman on the next bed.
For
the next few hours, the therapist taught the six naked and aroused women basic
relaxation and visualisation techniques, to help combat their nicotine
addiction. They were then advised to get a good night’s sleep. Sunday promised
to be a day of vigorous exercise and probable further punishment. Naturally,
their cigarette packets would be checked again.
The
women departed to their individual rooms, without a word to Marcella. When a
further hour elapsed, without them coming to her, she decided she had either
been forgiven or forgotten. With as much disappointment as relief, she switched
off her light and climbed into bed.
Five
minutes later, she heard the handle of her door being softly turned. As the
light came on, she sat up, drawing the sheets up to her chin.
Angela
entered the room, followed closely by the other four women. All were in their
night-dresses and each carried a different object, the purposes of which was
crystal clear. The last one in shut the door behind her.
‘Punishment
time,’ Angela announced, smacking her thigh with the thick leather belt in her
right fist. ‘Up you get.’
With
a heavy sigh, Marcella threw back the sheets and swung her feet onto the floor.
If she was going to be punished, and there was no doubt about that, she might
as well take it with dignity.
‘I’ve
been looking forward to this all evening,’ said Angela. ‘Take that nightie off
and show us your bottom.’
Marcella
complied without argument, her black silk nightdress pooling around her ankles.
Underneath, she was completely naked.
‘Isn’t
her bottom a lovely shade of pink!’ Angela purred, licking her lips.
‘Red
suits her far better,’ one of the other women replied.
‘Let’s
get on with it,’ urged another.
Angela
instructed Marcella to crouch doggy style on the bed, legs apart and bottom
raised. When she was in position, Angela raised the belt above her head and
brought it down on her upthrust cheeks, with a pistol-like crack.
‘Ow!’
Marcella shrieked.
‘Keep
quiet,’ the bespectacled woman hissed. ‘You don’t want Max walking in and
finding you like this. God knows what he’d do.’
Marcella
wasn’t really certain of what he could do and even more certain she would not
object. A second whack cut short her fantasy. Four more brought the fire back
to her cheeks, in all its breathtaking glory. Angela would have gladly thrashed
her livid, but for four equally eager punishers awaiting their turn.
The
next woman used a wooden handled hairbrush to vigorously smack Marcella’s inner
thighs and the backs of her legs, until they throbbed bright red. As soon as
she was finished, a plump blonde knelt beside Marcella on the bed and whacked
her bottom with a slipper, deepening the hue of both cheeks. Marcella had begun
to regret having even thought of stealing a cigarette.
The
next object to strike her glowing backside was a thin leather thong, which the
woman administering the punishment had removed from her basque. The waspish
sting of each lash brought tears to Marcella’s eyes. Only the cane had
possessed more bite than this.
Finally,
when she was sure she could take no more, the plastic back of a hand-held
mirror was used to paddle her buttocks, filling the room with a sharp smacking
sound.
‘That
will teach her to keep her thieving hands to herself,’ Angela mused, when the
punishment was finally completed. ‘Let her have a look.’
The
woman with the mirror held it behind Marcella’s bottom. She looked around and
uttered a loud gasp. Her buttocks and thighs glowed a deep shade of sunburn.
The streaks where the leather thong had struck her were even brighter.
Angela
smiled wickedly. ‘That should do for now.’
After
breakfast, the following morning, cigarettes were once more counted. That was
when Marcella received a further nasty surprise.
‘Fourteen!’
Brigitte cried. ‘Max, this is appalling!’
‘Indeed
it is,’ he agreed, rising from his chair at the head of the table. ‘She is
obviously in need of further punishment.’
As
she indignantly protested her innocence, Marcella caught Angela grinning slyly
from across the table. The bitch had not been content with last night’s
punishment. She had stolen three of her cigarettes as well, guaranteeing her
yet further humiliation.
‘We’ll
do this outside,’ Brigitte announced. ‘Come on, all of you.’
As
they followed their hosts out to the garden. Marcella grabbed Angela’s arm.
‘I’ll
get you for this,’ she whispered.
‘I
hope so,’ the other woman replied. ‘I’ll give you my number before we leave.’
‘I
shall deal with her this time,’ said Brigitte, seating herself on a thick tree
stump at the bottom of the garden. She beckoned to Marcella. ‘You, across my
knee. Now!’
Marcella
bent over the blond woman’s lap, no longer embarrassed by the presence of an
audience. Angela’s thinly veiled promise had stirred up a cauldron of
conflicting emotions. Brigitte yanked her long skirt up around her waist. She
was wearing no underwear and her buns remained rosy from her previous
punishment.
‘You
do seem to be enjoying your stay,’ Brigitte murmured. ‘No wonder you could
hardly sit down for breakfast.’
So
saying, she proceeded to smack her bottom without mercy. Her open palm was a
near blur as it rose and fell. Marcella’s cries of ‘ouch!… ow!’ provided a
perfect accompaniment to the symphony of flesh striking flesh.
The
spanking lasted several minutes, until Brigitte’s palm was tingling and her arm
ached. Almost casually, she allowed her right hand to fall between Marcella’s
thigh. A finger penetrated her briefly, just long enough to trigger a truly delicious
orgasm. The five watching women exchanged knowing glances. Angela sighed
dreamily and licked her lips.
The
remainder of Marcella’s day passed in a semi-euphoric blur. The combination of
hours of vigorous exercise, visualisation therapy and a further caning from Max
left all six women exhausted. All swore to practise the improvement program he
gave them.
Marcella
was almost sorry when it was time to leave. Her knickers were padded with wads
of cotton wool, making sitting in the passenger seat of the Mercedes just about
bearable.
‘So
how did it go?’ Ben demanded.
‘Fine,’
she answered distractedly, shifting on the seat. ‘They’re very… uh… firm in
their approach.’
‘As
long as it works,’ he said.
She
waved to Angela, who was climbing into her lemon Mini. The woman smiled and
patted her own bottom.
‘It
works,’ Marcella replied.
Love the story believe or not I started chatting to a 19 girl fir last 3 months who is crazy on school Cp old fashioned punishments
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ReplyDeleteHow utterly delightful, Fleas. Such a wonderful, cute, nonchalant smack on the buttocks of the PC elephant in the room!
A delicious riposte to the terror of wishy-washy woke nonsense, if you will. I love these stories.
I have such fond, nostalgic memories of all the super-hero, strict, kind, hardworking Southern moms comparing notes outside Church in the 1960s & 70s & beyond - with their canes, straps & paddles neatly filed at home for their exasperating, naughty daughters' bare bottoms. Georgia USA was spanking central. Oh my! This was light years before this excellent, enlightened Behavioural Correction Centre gotten invented!
Thanks a bunch, Fleas.
Brenda xx
I've always loved these artworks, especially the last one, so it's great to have the story to go with them!
ReplyDeletePaula’s pictures are really first rate
DeletePaula Meadow's artwork is legendary.
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